tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post9166960680483816884..comments2023-08-07T15:01:26.348+01:00Comments on BabberBlog: FictionLewishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12440823297493425971noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-22719725114590530462012-08-22T19:21:49.694+01:002012-08-22T19:21:49.694+01:00Enjoyed. :-)Enjoyed. :-)@eddsnotdeadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03857380119301199214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-43295901367161910182012-08-22T19:21:41.377+01:002012-08-22T19:21:41.377+01:00Enjoyed. :-)Enjoyed. :-)@eddsnotdeadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03857380119301199214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-421171332109639902012-08-22T19:21:29.205+01:002012-08-22T19:21:29.205+01:00Enjoyed. :-)Enjoyed. :-)@eddsnotdeadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03857380119301199214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-62762030706254796572012-08-22T18:56:50.006+01:002012-08-22T18:56:50.006+01:00Good build up of tension, nice tempting reveals of...Good build up of tension, nice tempting reveals of a 'time before', and a teasing cliffhanger. Great! If you're going to expand, please let us know a bit more about the narrator. Sometimes I just like to know who's telling the story :) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-47530542178200989242012-08-22T18:43:51.322+01:002012-08-22T18:43:51.322+01:00What happens next??!??!What happens next??!??!Rachellwilliamsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-67148075394567563312012-08-22T09:34:30.438+01:002012-08-22T09:34:30.438+01:00Please sir, can I have some more?
I really want t...Please sir, can I have some more? <br />I really want to know what happens next :) Zarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14716909743500813517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-88793681813127481542012-08-22T06:52:47.681+01:002012-08-22T06:52:47.681+01:00more please!!!more please!!!Vicki-kitchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12138498721041791902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-29887661433212644522012-08-22T00:43:43.775+01:002012-08-22T00:43:43.775+01:00More, more ! More, more ! Bigmamasuenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4256773225141600058.post-79657901665595536082012-08-22T00:13:45.096+01:002012-08-22T00:13:45.096+01:00Wow! That's brilliant. Is there a part two?......Wow! That's brilliant. Is there a part two?...<br />You should write a lot more like this. Anoop Singh-Bestnoreply@blogger.com